oi. i wont comment on the content. but as a graphic designer, the layout is really well done (of course, its coming from you) one thing, i think that the obama in the background middle right side of the composition behind the logo takes away a bit since you can only see three letters. i think it would work just fine without it. and maybe move the top right background logo up and to the right a bit. it has some funky negative space going on with the white circle around the logo. in other words, make it bleed all the way out of the composition. Much loves!
thanks, i always welcome suggestions. especially from you. i must admit this was a little hastily thrown together. i did this some time ago and have been meaning to revisit it. i'll do just that, or create an entirely new one. when i created it they really didn't have any downloadable content to use, so i basically ripped some of it from logos and whatnot. now they do, should make it much easier.
in any case, whether you agree with it or not, thanks. love ya!
but as a graphic designer, the layout is really well done (of course, its coming from you)
one thing, i think that the obama in the background middle right side of the composition behind the logo takes away a bit since you can only see three letters. i think it would work just fine without it.
and maybe move the top right background logo up and to the right a bit. it has some funky negative space going on with the white circle around the logo. in other words, make it bleed all the way out of the composition.
Much loves!
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in any case, whether you agree with it or not, thanks. love ya!
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Rêver dans la vie